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Unity, Coherence, A Topic Sentence, and Adequate Development. Concluding paragraph:

Unity, Coherence, A Topic Sentence, and Adequate Development. Concluding paragraph:

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you should be able to summarize each main point in a simple phrase

Simply list off the points as a reminder to your audience about what

they’ve just read Be sure to avoid the following missteps



contractions (I've, she's) and colloquialisms (What's up?):





New Information Personal Opinion Lots of Details







In my opinion, watching TV has advantages but it also includes disadvantages



Keep one idea to one paragraph

Students who don’t have paragraphs fail!



Unity: thing nhất

Coherence: đính kết

1. Generally 3-5 sentences are necessary per paragraph.

2. Details may include reasons, examples, stories, statistics

3. Indent the first sentence of every paragraph











Key words can be repeated in several sentences

Synonymous words can be repeated in several sentences

Pronouns can refer to nouns in previous sentences

Transition words can be used to link ideas from different sentences



Another important thing to note is that

But then something else significant happened

There are other things to note about Tan as well

In the first place

In the second place

Lastly

The first of these benefits

An improved appearance, which is a second benefit of regular exercise

In addition to the self-confidence engendered by an improved appearance

Although easy solutions to the goals of losing weight and achieving an attractive,

energetic body saturate the media



Body paragraph

Main point

Support

Transitions

In the past years there has been an increasing violence to happen at schools not only in town but

also in rural areas. This essay will discuss the reasons for this and how its disadvantages effect on society.

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One reason for this tendency belongs to a family. A child need be passionately cared for by his or

her parents in order to grow up in a balanced way. Unfortunately it is the increasing divorce that children

lack of love and care from their parents. In addition to this, the curriculum seems not to focus on helping

children gaining cardinal virtues such as love, forgiveness and sense of honour. Therefore, hurting a

classmate’s feelings is sometimes considered as a means of recreation, which leads to the growing

crudeness. Last but not least, children both male and female play the computer games with too many

fighting sights. This is the very reason for spreading aggressiveness or even bloodiness among school

children.

I would argue that violence at school has no positive impacts on society. Conversely, violence

developing at school causes so many problems to children and society. One of the first ways to combat the

problem is to cover every student with love and tolerance especially the child whose family is disorder.

Secondly, there should be more lessons about cardinal virtues rather than science lessons. A student needs

to become a good civiliant before an intellectual civilian. Finally, parents also have to take more

responsibility for their children’s actions. They not only provide their children with money, food or clothes

but also have an eye on their children during their time off school.

To sum up, there is an expanding trend of violence to school. However, the bad effects resulting

from school violence on students themselves, on family and on society are possibly satisfactorily tackled if

the people involved in pay some more attention to these.



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