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Unity, Coherence, A Topic Sentence, and Adequate Development. Concluding paragraph:

Unity, Coherence, A Topic Sentence, and Adequate Development. Concluding paragraph:

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you should be able to summarize each main point in a simple phrase
Simply list off the points as a reminder to your audience about what
they’ve just read Be sure to avoid the following missteps

contractions (I've, she's) and colloquialisms (What's up?):


New Information Personal Opinion Lots of Details



In my opinion, watching TV has advantages but it also includes disadvantages

Keep one idea to one paragraph
Students who don’t have paragraphs fail!

Unity: thing nhất
Coherence: đính kết
1. Generally 3-5 sentences are necessary per paragraph.
2. Details may include reasons, examples, stories, statistics
3. Indent the first sentence of every paragraph





Key words can be repeated in several sentences
Synonymous words can be repeated in several sentences
Pronouns can refer to nouns in previous sentences
Transition words can be used to link ideas from different sentences

Another important thing to note is that
But then something else significant happened
There are other things to note about Tan as well
In the first place
In the second place
Lastly
The first of these benefits
An improved appearance, which is a second benefit of regular exercise
In addition to the self-confidence engendered by an improved appearance
Although easy solutions to the goals of losing weight and achieving an attractive,
energetic body saturate the media

Body paragraph
Main point
Support
Transitions
In the past years there has been an increasing violence to happen at schools not only in town but
also in rural areas. This essay will discuss the reasons for this and how its disadvantages effect on society.
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One reason for this tendency belongs to a family. A child need be passionately cared for by his or
her parents in order to grow up in a balanced way. Unfortunately it is the increasing divorce that children
lack of love and care from their parents. In addition to this, the curriculum seems not to focus on helping
children gaining cardinal virtues such as love, forgiveness and sense of honour. Therefore, hurting a
classmate’s feelings is sometimes considered as a means of recreation, which leads to the growing
crudeness. Last but not least, children both male and female play the computer games with too many
fighting sights. This is the very reason for spreading aggressiveness or even bloodiness among school
children.
I would argue that violence at school has no positive impacts on society. Conversely, violence
developing at school causes so many problems to children and society. One of the first ways to combat the
problem is to cover every student with love and tolerance especially the child whose family is disorder.
Secondly, there should be more lessons about cardinal virtues rather than science lessons. A student needs
to become a good civiliant before an intellectual civilian. Finally, parents also have to take more
responsibility for their children’s actions. They not only provide their children with money, food or clothes
but also have an eye on their children during their time off school.
To sum up, there is an expanding trend of violence to school. However, the bad effects resulting
from school violence on students themselves, on family and on society are possibly satisfactorily tackled if
the people involved in pay some more attention to these.

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